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Pri$eless nigga...
« on: December 01, 2007, 07:38:55 PM »

http://www.zshare.net/audio/53067664d1286e/

it was from the grinding freestyle but it flowed to this beat so I just spit to it


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on the block trappin like the lakers in the 80's

Re: Pri$eless nigga...
« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2007, 08:25:19 PM »

it was aight, u started off good, the last few bars were forgettable.


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either u rap or u run ball,
sell crack or u pump raw....nigga one or the other
im from a hood where it aint no real brotherly luvin
just the trap cause we stuck in the gutta.

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Re: Pri$eless nigga...
« Reply #2 on: December 01, 2007, 08:38:05 PM »

Quote from: copkillaz on December 01, 2007, 08:25:19 PM

it was aight, u started off good, the last few bars were forgettable.

iight good looks


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Re: Pri$eless nigga...
« Reply #3 on: December 05, 2007, 01:14:25 AM »

Qaulity was bad, flow was off at some points, lyrics were ight, delivery needs work, gotta show more confidence on your tracks and talk more shit.

That's about it.


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Re: Pri$eless nigga...
« Reply #4 on: December 30, 2007, 04:04:31 PM »

it was ight ya flow was off sometimes da beat to low and da quality is horrible but keep at it


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Re: Pri$eless nigga...
« Reply #5 on: December 30, 2007, 05:50:28 PM »

iight I got ya good looks!!!


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